http://www.latimes.com/news/science/la-sci-diabetes-reverse-vaccine-20130627,0,7543654.story
This article interested me because it signals a transforming world with greater benefits. Reading this article evoked a sense of pride in the advancing world we live in and how intelligent scientists are to create such a vaccine to kill of killer cells that cause diabetes. Throughout the article, the author also conveys a sense of amazement and wonder for the vaccine that could improve many lives. The article is written in a well structured manner in a way that transitions to direct implications of the vaccine to its general effect on the population.
Although it is the first step to treating diabetes, this vaccine garners much appreciation and hope for patients with diabetes to now that they will not live with the illness forever. When the article explains that the vaccine would suppress the immune system from producing the killer cells, it opens up the medical discussion of the procedure and its consequences. As a result, the pancreatic instinct is to produce insulin, which therefore leads to a beneficial cause due to insulin being the main lack in a diabetic's body. Another half of the article was the experiment, conducted with this vaccine and previous medicine. The vaccine's effectiveness outweighed the previous treatment's effects on the body. The outcome of this result definitely changes my perspective and helped me realize the benefits having such intellects to continually create such notions that advance society is a benefit. With the diction used throughout the article, it conveys a sense of respect and admiration at this new finding, and I can't help but feel happy once again for the scientists who developed the vaccine. This article promises a bright, new material that helps understand a logical part of the main type 1 diabetes inborn in them.
Your summarization is pretty straightforward, not going into any details but just the main point. The post could have needed a little more analysis, but overall, it was structured extremely well: sticking to the point in each section and then somehow connected them together. Even though the article stated that during the trials, side effects did not show up, do you think that the vaccination might possibly have it? Somehow, this vaccination seems to be too good to be true.
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